OK, my book sales are in the...toilet. Bad. Miserable. IOW, something no author wants to see. Currently, when bring up the individual book page for First Strike, the text reads like this: The World of Chërnyi: First Strike is at its heart a story about people facing the problems presented after a major disaster turns the world upside-down. You will follow the travels of Nora Richmond, MSN; Lieutenant Albert Drake of the R.A.F. Search and Rescue Service and Steve Wahpaha, a crusty old Marine as they work to establish a new life for themselves in the classic and often told tale of surviving "The End of the World as We Know it Today." Follow these three and their friends as they confront likely (and realistic) problems associated with a planet wide disaster. It may just give you something to think about.. I'm thinking some a bit more...exciting might be better. Like this: Diverted from a routine training exercise, the crew of Pedro Six Two is sent hurtling across county into the teeth of a howling blizzard on a mercy mission. The mission was completed, although with a tragic price. Now on the ground at a remote hospital, the crew is stranded by the storm, hundreds of miles from home base. The situation becomes dire when the area is smashed by an unknown force from space, leaving the aircraft damaged beyond use. Facing the loss of power, communications and growing chaos, the crew must now make some very hard choices.... The first in this six book series, First Strike follows one of the crew, Lieutenant Albert Drake of the R.A.F. Search and Rescue Service. He partners with Nora Richmond, a nurse form the hospital, as they face many dangers in an attempt to reach a property owned by Nora. A place where they might avoid the worst of the troubles now burning up the world.... When the havoc finds them, all bets are off. Thoughts please... 1st edit made. More please!