Sample, Book 2 - Going Home, Chapter 2.

Text stripped after the brief review period to preserve copyright. Chapter One still up - see below.

 

I see some folks have stopped by

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DKR,I enjoyed reading chapter 2 of going home. It has good action sequences and plot. I feel that it needs to be "fleshed out" a little bit more so that the readers can grasp more details of the character and the story line. I think including chapter 1 with your post would have helped in this regard.Otherwise an excellent read.

 

READ ME FIRST - Chaoter One

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Now that is a great first chapter,filled in alot of blanks and kept me "hooked". I truly enjoyed these two chapters.Now to get me my own copy. Great work DKR. Don't stop writing.