Sample, Book 2 - Going Home, Chapter 2.

Discussion in 'Survival Reading Room' started by DKR, Nov 16, 2011.


  1. DKR

    DKR Interesting ideas, interesting stories

    Text stripped after the brief review period to preserve copyright. Chapter One still up - see below.
     
  2. DKR

    DKR Interesting ideas, interesting stories

    I see some folks have stopped by

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  3. Sapper John

    Sapper John Analog Monkey in a Digital World

    DKR,I enjoyed reading chapter 2 of going home. It has good action sequences and plot. I feel that it needs to be "fleshed out" a little bit more so that the readers can grasp more details of the character and the story line. I think including chapter 1 with your post would have helped in this regard.Otherwise an excellent read.
     
  4. DKR

    DKR Interesting ideas, interesting stories

    READ ME FIRST - Chaoter One

    I remove samples after a time to protect my copyright.
     
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  5. Sapper John

    Sapper John Analog Monkey in a Digital World

    Now that is a great first chapter,filled in alot of blanks and kept me "hooked". I truly enjoyed these two chapters.Now to get me my own copy. Great work DKR. Don't stop writing.
     
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