Short Story: Unprepared by UncleMorgan

Discussion in 'Survival Reading Room' started by UncleMorgan, Nov 9, 2015.


  1. UncleMorgan

    UncleMorgan I eat vegetables. My friends are not vegetables.

    Here's one I wrote a while back. I wanted to get away from the usual survival porn (big money + big toys+ super competence), and so I made the hero a little less than heroic.
     

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  2. Motomom34

    Motomom34 Moderator Moderator Site Supporter++

    Wow! I want to know if Charlie.... won't say and spoil it for others. @UncleMorgan great story. The beginning was great. If collapse ever happened you wonder how many would be thinking the same thing. Thank you for sharing.


    @PaxMentis good read
     
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  3. bagpiper

    bagpiper Heretic

    Wonderful story @UncleMorgan ... I loved your writing style and proper writing ability.
    Has the makings of a dynamite series...
    :5s:
     
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  4. tc556guy

    tc556guy Monkey++

    Liked the story. Thanks for sharing it
     
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  5. tired-medic

    tired-medic Monkey++

    Neat and scary. Must be too realistic I suppose! Good story!
     
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  6. AD1

    AD1 Monkey+++

    Very nice!

    Now finish that sucker!!! !
     
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  7. Tully Mars

    Tully Mars Metal weldin' monkey Site Supporter+

    OK you posted this in Nov its now Jan. You need to get a move on:)
    A great start to what's shaping up to be a good story!
     
  8. Motomom34

    Motomom34 Moderator Moderator Site Supporter++

    @UncleMorgan, see what he said ^^^^^, I second it!
     
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  9. UncleMorgan

    UncleMorgan I eat vegetables. My friends are not vegetables.

    Whups! I'd written this one as a stand-alone short story, but I'll go ahead and get started on a what-happens-next for Charlie. I'll see if I can work up something interesting to befall him--a fate even worse than True Love. (Gasp!)
     
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  10. Racer 27

    Racer 27 Monkey+

    Good start. Please write some more of this tale.
     
  11. chelloveck

    chelloveck Diabolus Causidicus

    Nice story....Sad Sack gets a sack to get into a sack....thanks for sharing @UncleMorgan
     
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