Original Work The Unwelcome Sign

Nice touch chelloveck…nice indeed. Thank you…puts a picture to the story. Lived in Hawaii a few years ago…not overly fond of island living…but! The story does draw me into the scene.

 

Bout tobstart on page 17 this is great! Ive lost alot of sleep lol. Thanks alot this is a great read!

 

Anyone keeping a body count on the toads? (This is the wrong time and place for a 'fair' fight!)

 

Not very relevant considering their birfrate and complete lack of regard for fighting age.

 

I b thinking, the toads should not have made an appearance n de story if''fin dey b wants d far fight! ;-)

Age has no illusion in total war; mites make lice as my dear old granny used to say about the frontier wars.

 

It's all or nothing. I hope the children of The Enlightenment are up to the task of Paleolithic war rules.

In a three sided fight the side that lets the first two exhaust themselves comes fresh to finish off both.

 

Or comes in unexperienced and unable to conquer either causing them to unite to defeat 'the righteous' through evil and charnel ways…;-)

 

Cant reply too hooked just got past the dream after jake was shot i thought i missed somthing hit back almost fliped thinking you skipped over somthing lol thanks again this is great

 

I am a fan.

 

Nooooooooo!!!! I reached the end of whats done! Im freakin out man!

 

Yeah how well I know, it really sucks to be an action addict ;-)

 

Now you can join the club...
I wonder if Zen is on a Zeb-attical...
(tink tink tink, on the screen) Zen? Oh Zen?

 

@Zengunfighter did you quit on us?

 

That which is precious be worth de wate and all dat sheet. ;-)

 

I check several times a day...

 

Apparently I am suffering from a stultifying disfunction of the axions and internet fever…;-)

 

I guess we have to wait for the good stuff...

 

So is it done?

 

Nope! I think not…there still be toads to fry ;-)

I have to commend the author for getting my interest up and firing up my enthusiasm for reading books…something that needed doing; I not only read what he writes here but have purchased a bunch of similar story novels…and now read both…when this comes out in print I'll buy a copy…but first we must do something about the fat toad he's hiding (and starving to hear it from the toad!).

 

Still checking, a couple of times a day, for another chapter...